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So, as week two of NaNo draws to a middle, I find that my plot of Adam and Steve hooking up after double-date mishaps is a bit lacking. The solution clearly lies somewhere within this poll:

[Poll #382295]

Thanks to [livejournal.com profile] ramen_addict for the Yuki Bunny icon :)

Date: 2004-11-10 09:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sociofemme.livejournal.com
What if Carly was actually a sooper sekrit gambler and left behind huge debts, which the local goombahs now think Adam is responsible for, so Steve has to help him on his wild crosscountry scramble to escape the clutches of the Guidos. On the way, they have sex in as many motel rooms as possible.

Or, Carly is an informant on her mobster boss, which is why she left so abruptly, only now her boss thinks Adam was in on it. See above re: sex + road trip.

Or, Carly was an informant, but the trial is over and it's safe to come home. But omg, Adam + Steve! Not only give you a wide-open shot at sarcastic jokes, but also some romantic tension and angst angst angst opportunities. Or, and let's be honest about who's writing this comment here, threesome opportunities.

Date: 2004-11-10 10:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mousapelli.livejournal.com
Or, Carly was an informant, but the trial is over
you are just trying to get me to write Jack McCoy, don't even lie.

I sort of life the gambling debt backstory. this was weirdly the best way ever to come up with some plots, when really i was just being funny. I should post this on the boards.

Date: 2004-11-10 10:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sociofemme.livejournal.com
hahahaha my sekrit plot is revealed! now your mousapeller army will have to come after me, bwahahahaahaha!

hee, yes you should! a little silliness can reap rewards, is the lesson we all learned here, I think.

Also that the empathy board was working at THREE TIMES the normal capacity.

Date: 2004-11-11 07:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laylah.livejournal.com
I think you could combine options one and two really nicely.

Steve discovers that Adam has these outrageous mob debts, and without consulting Adam about it, begins planning the diamond heist in order to get the money to bail him out of trouble. Adam, not knowing that Steve has a plan, decides to gamble on the illegal rat fights. Each of them discovers the other's shady, dubiously-legal plan; misunderstandings, betrayal, hijinks ensue. Eventual reconciliation as the successful outcome of both schemes allows Adam to pay off his debts and Steve to spring for a Caribbean trip for both of them.

Date: 2004-11-11 07:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mousapelli.livejournal.com
this was the best accidental writing excercise ever. 1 and 2 are indeed my favorites.

I think it should also be discovered that the reason Carly had the rat in the first place was so that she could train it to win rat fights, in addition to all the subterfuge you mention.

See, NOW i'm excited. This is what NaNo is all about.

PS--i bittorrented KKM 17-22 from someplace random. I don't know what number you are at, but if you need them i'll be more than happy to pass them along :)

Date: 2004-11-11 09:41 am (UTC)
instantramen: a woman with black hair and white skin pouring water from a kettle (blue moon baby)
From: [personal profile] instantramen
Or Steve steals the Green Mountain and as a result catches a mysterious and possibly fatal disease (which could be, like, this ancient Native American curse [which is always fun] or a biochemical safety measure or something) and Adam's the Only One Who Can Save Him, but he's torn between saving him and handing him over to the authorities to cure him and lock him up.

Of course, all the other ideas are fantastic, too. ^_^

Date: 2004-11-11 10:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fantomeq.livejournal.com
My answer to all questions is "MORE RAT!"

Date: 2004-11-15 02:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mousapelli.livejournal.com
*finally answers comment*

lol, you know, as much time as i spend in HP fandom, i thought more people would be all about the boyslash for no good reason *g*

nah, i haven't archived any of these things, there's just the random chunks i've put up on my journal. Since I've started all over anyway, I haven't really done anything organized with them.

And why is my icon showing up as the red x of doom? *kicks LJ*
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