"what are you thinking right now?"
Dec. 21st, 2004 02:18 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
mousapellii'm reading a series of SG-1 Jack/Daniel that Icarus recommended, the Steak Series, and it is really really good (they're such GUYS, it's brilliant, Steve and Adam could benefit from some of this guyness during the edits).
but can I tell you that it throws me completely out of a story when somebody says "what are you thinking right now?" it has nothing to do with bad writing, it's just that I had an incident where i was asked that during an abortive hook-up once, and it still gives me the willies.
but can I tell you that it throws me completely out of a story when somebody says "what are you thinking right now?" it has nothing to do with bad writing, it's just that I had an incident where i was asked that during an abortive hook-up once, and it still gives me the willies.
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Date: 2004-12-21 10:27 am (UTC)