er, yugioh fic?

[mousapelli]

I'm not sure if this is the beginning of a fic or not, but I seem to be rather cracked out today.

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"This," Malik said, peering into his lunch bag, "this is the last straw."

Yugi, Joey, Tea, and Tristan all exchanged glances.

"They raise me in a cult, carve shit into my back, make me go to public school, public school, and now," the bag crumpled in Malik's grip, "I swear to Ra I will not take this indignity any longer!"

"Egg salad again," Tristan shook his head.

"Oh man, that's the third day in a row," Joey said sadly.

"When I get home, Isis is SO TOTALLY in for a Shadow Game!" Malik snarled, shooting to his feet. "I'll send her so far into the Shadow Realm she won't be able to find her ass with a…"

"Here," Yugi interrupted, "I'll trade you my pudding cup for it."

"Okay." Malik flopped back down onto the bench.

Comments

[gmth.livejournal.com]

Nah, you got Joey all wrong. It should be:

"Oh man, dis is da turd day in a row."

*nods*

[mousapelli.livejournal.com]

*g* and *shudders*

so much badfic...awash in bad jou dialogue...*twitches*

which is a shame, really, because he might have become my favorite character when he offered Yugi porn to solidify their friendship.

[fantomeq.livejournal.com]

I just wanted to say that my husband keeps saying things are "a beery color."

[mousapelli.livejournal.com]

haha, it's a perfectly good word!

[fantomeq.livejournal.com]

We should form a coalition to drop by random message boards and use it to spread its popularity!

[issen4.livejournal.com]

Just dropped by to say that while I know nothing about YGO, I want to read more of this fic!

[mousapelli.livejournal.com]

*g* we'll see what we can do.

right now Yugi and Bakura are exchanging exasperated glances because nobody else can tell when somebody completely different is in control of either one's body.