mousapelli: (rock god)
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here's the poem I got, short but cute:

A prince becomes a shocking knave.
Yea, I am a merry fool
Turning and turning in the widening gyre
Time does not bring relief; you all have lied
You'd think the inner dome of heaven had fallen.
For God's sake hold your tongue, and let me love;

[livejournal.com profile] musesfool got a really interesting one, particularly the last few lines. You guys were not too poetical...

Want to try again? Put a line of poetry in my comments here and we'll see what happens.

Date: 2004-04-06 08:36 am (UTC)
ext_1310: (writing)
From: [identity profile] musesfool.livejournal.com
With gloves, and knots the silly snares of pleasure

Date: 2004-04-06 08:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] contrariwise.livejournal.com
By sea-girls wreathed with seaweed red and brown

Date: 2004-04-06 09:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rooneytunes.livejournal.com
The morning comes to consciousness.

Date: 2004-04-06 09:52 am (UTC)
instantramen: a woman with black hair and white skin pouring water from a kettle (between you and me...)
From: [personal profile] instantramen
But I was going to say when Truth broke in

Date: 2004-04-06 09:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] linelen.livejournal.com
Into the rose garden

Date: 2004-04-06 11:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] miscellanny.livejournal.com
I have outwalked the farthest city light.

Date: 2004-04-06 11:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sbbo.livejournal.com
Until alone I become, draped in darkness of my own.

Date: 2004-04-06 01:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blippfrogg.livejournal.com
Dead men are wisest, for they know

Date: 2004-04-06 01:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-russell.livejournal.com
Fitz fixes feist; fat suffices. ^^

Date: 2004-04-06 02:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusinwax.livejournal.com
fled is that music- do i wake or sleep?

Date: 2004-04-06 03:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] meupatdoes.livejournal.com
a million billion trillion stars

Date: 2004-04-06 05:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mooncharm.livejournal.com
all the threads of light gathered to me here;

Date: 2004-04-06 05:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toujoursimpur.livejournal.com
because I could not stop for Death
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