here's the poem I got, short but cute:
A prince becomes a shocking knave.
Yea, I am a merry fool
Turning and turning in the widening gyre
Time does not bring relief; you all have lied
You'd think the inner dome of heaven had fallen.
For God's sake hold your tongue, and let me love;
musesfool got a really interesting one, particularly the last few lines. You guys were not too poetical...
Want to try again? Put a line of poetry in my comments here and we'll see what happens.
A prince becomes a shocking knave.
Yea, I am a merry fool
Turning and turning in the widening gyre
Time does not bring relief; you all have lied
You'd think the inner dome of heaven had fallen.
For God's sake hold your tongue, and let me love;
Want to try again? Put a line of poetry in my comments here and we'll see what happens.
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